I’m swallowed whole by loss of scale, by how tiny I am, how brief I am...
I think this is a big poem. Curious to know if you almost ended it with the second to last stanza?
I am sending you two poems from my "Last Recurrent Dream" that are in a similar vein.
Gary - I've been hankering to write and epic poem, maybe this will be a beginning. I was just so damned excited to have settled on my current inability to take in the fantasical everything, that I had to get something out!
Gorgeous again Tim, the depth of reflection bubbling forth from depth of soul, your soul, which as you know is vast like The vastness.
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I think this is a big poem. Curious to know if you almost ended it with the second to last stanza?
I am sending you two poems from my "Last Recurrent Dream" that are in a similar vein.
Gary - I've been hankering to write and epic poem, maybe this will be a beginning. I was just so damned excited to have settled on my current inability to take in the fantasical everything, that I had to get something out!
Gorgeous again Tim, the depth of reflection bubbling forth from depth of soul, your soul, which as you know is vast like The vastness.
I subscribed to your substack today! Thanks as ever for reading and commenting.